Friday 21 December 2018
Day 2: Summer Learning Journey Forest Life (4 Points)
I Wouldnt want to go to the trees because it might get cold or I might get lost
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Kia Ora Mariko,
ReplyDeleteWell done for working through another SLJ activity.
I see you have written you don't want to go to Tāne Mahuta. However, in order for me to give you full points for this activity, I need to see you engage more with the task.
You've told us that you don't want to go because you might get cold, or you might get lost. These are fair reasons for why you might not want to go. However, to receive full points you could give more flair to your blog entry.
Some ideas include: Adding images (remember to attribute where you get these images from) or you could write more. What facts do you know about Tāne Mahuta? Did you know that it has a safe walking track that takes you to the Kauri tree, so you won't get lost!
I look forward to seeing what other cool things you can do to this blog post!
Thanks,
Jordan