Friday, 20 December 2019
Summer Learning Journey Week 1 Day 5 Activity 2: Swimming to Safety [4 points]
In Damascus Syria there was a young girl called Yusra and she was scared of the water. while her friends was swimming she was standing in the corner. She started to put her toe in the water and she tried to lift a float and put her head underwater and after that she was swimming her dad trained her and her and she started winning left and right. when she was 13 she started getting problems of swimming bc her country was in war.
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Hey Mariko,
ReplyDeleteIt's awesome to see a nice long post from you. You have retold the story well and picked up on some key pieces of information to share with your readers.
This is a good post and you have completed the activity, you may want to slow down and have a look at some of the tips on the "Eye-Catching Blog Posts" page to have more fun with making posts. I loved the slideshows you did for the day 2 activities.
Remember that you can skip ahead and do any of the tasks in any order, so maybe you could start with some of your favourites next week. I hope are enjoying the SLJ activities and enjoy your holidays with family and stay safe over the break. I’ll be back commenting on blogs after January 6th.
Daniel :)