I’m back from my break and ready to comment on your blogs again. I ate lots of nice food and lived off leftovers for a while and hung out with my family lots. I hope you had an awesome break over the holidays and enjoyed yourself. I’d love to hear what you got up to.
I like your poems rhymes, the last line especially works well, like the fear has been replaced, maybe with excitement. I did see the third slide initially so then it was a great surprise when I did. Your astronaut tick figure is really cool and the N.A.S.A. symbol is a great detail.
I hope you start posting again and have a look at the cool activities the SLJ has.
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Hey Mariko,
ReplyDeleteI’m back from my break and ready to comment on your blogs again. I ate lots of nice food and lived off leftovers for a while and hung out with my family lots. I hope you had an awesome break over the holidays and enjoyed yourself. I’d love to hear what you got up to.
I like your poems rhymes, the last line especially works well, like the fear has been replaced, maybe with excitement. I did see the third slide initially so then it was a great surprise when I did. Your astronaut tick figure is really cool and the N.A.S.A. symbol is a great detail.
I hope you start posting again and have a look at the cool activities the SLJ has.
Daniel :)